Glad to be back--I missed Six Sentence Sunday last week due to vacation. This is another tidbit from my Playa Del Carmen-set WIP, which I retooled and am now happier with. It's a conversation between my workaholic hero Andrew and his best friend Ben:
"Why can't you be a normal human being?" Ben asked, shaking his head. "You know, work eight or nine hours, hit the bar on the way home, go out with a girl once in a while?"
"I go out with girls," Andrew said.
"You meet pretty girls and bang them. That's not the same as going out with them."
"Jesus, what are you now, my mom?"
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12 comments:
Love it! Guy banter is pretty much my favorite thing. :)
I love this conversation. They sound like the old friends they are. Fabulous six.
Terrific dialogue. Love guys ragging on each other about their love lives!
Love it!
Excellent male banter!
FUNNY!! I love "guy" dialogue. Great six!
lol... "Jesus, what are you now, my mom?" Great dialogue! Nice six :-)
Great dialogue!
Haha. nice six.
lol what's normal? Nice six!
Hmm, I wonder exactly why Ben's so concerned about Andrew's love life? Nice six Linda, and welcome back.
This conversation is so absolutely authentic I can practically hear them. That's fabulous!
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